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Date: 2014-03-26 02:13 pm (UTC)There are other times when I realize that one of my characters is reminding me of someone so I might draw on that person's quirks to make the character seem more real. I think I'm not alone in sometimes having trouble thinking of idiosyncratic speech patterns and gestures and things for each character.
Mostly my characters are cobbled together from all different sources; general traits, pieces of other fictional characters, bits of real people, some of my own experiences, etc.
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Date: 2014-03-27 05:44 am (UTC)Otherwise, the source of character mannerisms seems to be a composite of real-life and fictional sources, to the extent I can't pinpoint a clear origin. The peasants from a story might talk and act partly like my relatives in the country and partly like the workmen from Silas Marner; the nobles have some of the mannerisms of bigwigs I've seen at official functions but also draw heavily from period dramas.
This does, however, raise the issue of whether we have the ethical obligation to avoid certain real-life inspirations, at least without the consent of the people involved. This review on a biography of Samuel Bellow mentions an incident where an old friend of Bellow's told him a story that the friend found embarrassing and specifically asked not to reproduce in fiction. Bellow did, however, use that story in Humboldt's Gift, understandably angering the friend. Though the reviewer takes Bellow's side, I agree with the biographer that Bellow's letter to his friend was dismissive and callous, basically coming down to "That wasn't you, so get over it. Also, you're welcome to use any story I told you--if you can. But you're a contractor and not a Big Name Novelist like me. Ha-ha!" While there is some truth in Bellow's statement that there is a distance between the real-life inspiration and the novelized product, maybe he could have discussed this breach of trust with his friend before putting it in a novel that would become world-famous? And maybe he could have been less of a dick about his friend's reaction? Ugh.
Anyway I know my dad, if he were ever to read my story--which he won't because I'm not showing it to him and he would have zero interest anyway--would be angry and hurt if he recognized himself in there. I'm not sure how I'd explain, and in truth I'm not sure I'd come across much better than Bellow did in his letter. I could point out the differences, that the abusive father in the story is a lazy drunk while my own father is practically a teetotaler and never once failed to provide for his family. I could say the character is partly based on the stereotypical drunk father common in fiction, and unfortunately in life. Still the similarities are there once you look for them, in the father's violent rages, his excuses for himself, and his need to control his child's life.
In the end my only real defense is that the character is really me, that they all come from me. The emptiness in the father character that catches up to him at the moments he can't distract himself, that was something I both imagined for the character and felt in my own life. The events in the story come from my understanding of what happened in my life, refracted and reflected in the planes of my own mind. In the end my ultimate model for my characters is myself.
Edit: Whoops! I accidentally made this a reply to sarillia when it was meant to reply to the OP. In a way it's fitting, though, since we both ended up using family members.
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Date: 2014-03-26 03:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-03-26 04:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-03-26 04:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-03-26 07:25 pm (UTC)But, nah. I generally try not to do that, haha.
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Date: 2014-03-26 10:35 pm (UTC)Of course, all of these characters have gone in ways that the original has not, and developed into unique characters. I don't know if that's better or worse than basing them off of real people. But 'made from scratch' is probably a misinterpretation.
Inspiration is a lot like compost, I think. You get interesting things out by having poured interesting things in.
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Date: 2014-03-26 11:07 pm (UTC)